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Jan 5, 2016 6:20:27 GMT
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Post by wingedtank on Jan 5, 2016 6:20:27 GMT
finn Just another target Male 24 years old | Octarian Soldier |
positive traits • Reserved • Calm • Analytical • Determined • Expert in long-range shooting negative traits • Moody and aggressive • Pessimistic • Tends to complain a lot • Everything seems to annoy him • He has no arms!! Shucks... " I could say something mean or hurtful, but that`d ruin the mood, now wouldn`t it? " what they like ✔ Sunlight and fresh air ✔ Peace and quiet ✔ Reasonable and intelligent colleagues ✔ Working on his own ✔ Defending the Octarian cause what they dislike ✘ Inklings. That's a given. ✘ Loud and active people ✘ Distractions from his work ✘ Jellyfish. Don`t ask. They`re creepy. ✘ Dogs... What`s a dog? CHARACTER DESCRIPTION Finn is a dedicated member of the Octarian military force. Being an Octosniper, he`s had experience with long-range firearms of Octarian origin, but he is rumoured to have practiced swordsmanship as well. He is roughly 180 cm tall, though most of his height is added through the length of his tentacle above his head. He is always seen wearing a pair of goggles, which are part of the standard equipments of Octosnipers. His aim is impeccable, as Finn has not missed a single target in his life before. ANOTHER SUBTITLE Word has it that Finn originally started off working as the royal advisor to the Octarian himself, however he was fired shortly after giving a piece of constructive critique and arrested for slander. After this he resumed a job more fitting to his type of statue, operating long-range weapons and hitting targets from afar. Despite his previous failure, Finn is a dedicated and fearless member of the Octarian army that is to be reckoned with. " You just want to have fun. " |
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Finn
Jan 6, 2016 6:03:30 GMT
Post by Pixel on Jan 6, 2016 6:03:30 GMT
[nospaces] revisions needed your application needs some edits I'm so glad to see an Octarian around here!! And he looks awesome already?! I can't wait to see more of him! Everything is here in terms of information, so there's just a few things left to add!! [break] • Down on the bottom bar where "You just want to have fun" is written, you'll also want to include a link to Finn's character account! If you type it like @username, it'll link automatically to Finn's account ;v; Then we can make sure his account is up to par, too! • The only other thing is his group - that'll actually have to be chosen from the list [here]! It sounds like he'd most likely fall under the Soldier category. Regardless, the group you choose for Finn should replace the "Marksman" bit on his application! • If you haven't already, Finn's account will most likely also need to be sorted into whichever group you choose! This can be done by clicking Profile, then Groups, and adding him to the group of your choice.
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Jan 6, 2016 12:23:52 GMT
Post by wingedtank on Jan 6, 2016 12:23:52 GMT
Yowza!
I shouldn`t add subcategories that don`t exist to the group "Soldiers". I fixed that and added a link to the now created account for my character. His group on his account should be fixed by now, too.
I realize that a lot of info is missing, which I´d certainly complete, but the template I got for my character`s info was a bit broken so I had to work with what I got, which is what this is after getting rid of all the jumbled, broken code that didn`t seem to work.
If you guys have a proper profile-template that works, hit me up! I`ll fix the profile immediately with all the other important stuff. Hope I did every thing right this time!
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Jan 6, 2016 23:33:04 GMT
Post by buttersheep on Jan 6, 2016 23:33:04 GMT
application approved prepare to get ink'd! COMMENTS: GG NO RE Your character's application has been reviewed and approved by a member of staff! Whether this is your first application or not, here are some tips to help get your character involved: [break] • Create a plotter or check out other plot pages • Head over to the wanted ads board and get involved |
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